·      Red-hot angst clouded his mindas he stared eye to eye with the enemy.

·      Just when he thought all was gone, there she stood, eyes glittered with tears.

·      Peter returned home only to discover a strong stench coming from hisroom.

·      Timothy entered his classroom but only to have his classmates staring from top to toe.

·      Harry was having his usual jog at the Town Council Park, but it had other visitors.

·      He could not control his emotions any longer. Clark smashed the cup nearest to his hand. He felt betrayed.

·      Tim was already late for work. Then the  MRT he was on stopped abruptly.

·      “What the hell were you thinking?!” , Dan shouted.

“I’m sorry, I’m so sorry.” Mel teared.

·      Everyone was dancing to the beat at the new club hotspot, MOT. Out of nowhere, a gunshot was heard.

·      “Oh my god!” gasped Tuna

“What should we do?” Waffles whispered back.

·      Chris had enough. He could not bear anything else. He made a leap from his bedroom window.

·      “Shit! I stepped on dog poo!” Ruzz cursed.

“Dude, that’s not dog poo, it’s…” Amin lost his voice.

2 Responses to “Openers”

  1. theredpants said

    Some of your openers are interesting (Number 11, 12) but some are just too general to be openers (Number 10, Number 2). Openers should be general enough to have potential for stories while specific enough to hook a reader into wanting to read more.

  2. coocooquack said

    HAHAHAHAHAHAH!! damn i cant stop laughing.

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